Saturday, January 11, 2014

5 min wirting

Officer Huckleberry stepped up the stairs to Mr. Leo’s front door. Mr. Leo opened the door. “Hello come and sit down.” “Thanks.” Officer Huckleberry sat down on a bright blue couch, around many delicate pottery and art. “Well,” Mr. Leo began. “This morning, I was upstairs, and I looked out my window to see teen bike from across the street to my front door. He crashed into the living room and I came downstairs with my boxing gloves, and standing on the bottom step, I saw him. He took a fine china dish and ran upstairs and escaped through an open window. Good thing I have insurance.” “Lying to insurance money,” Officer Huckleberry said. “Not happening. I found three flaws in your story.” WHAT ARE THE FLAWS?

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